| By Patrycja Szczeniowska,
on Sunday, 18 February 2007
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this text was left alone somewhere under tons of my books and at that time I wasn't really ready to come back and correct it . Now when I got motivated enough I took a look at it and finally worked out :-)) I want to thank Rik Zutphen for all his time he spent on reading my poetry and giving me suggestions and helping me to change some parts,he is a very good motivation for me and encouragement .thanks Rik ....on jest zakrecony:-)
Breath matcher, steps catcher passionate maker radiating His love , rejoicing of those who act real , and don't block I say stop, listen, respond catch straight paths and go Thought, feeling, reflection, taste the bread , stretch the edges and borders mess and order What....... ? Does match your breath What...........? Does catch your breath with spinning heart sacrificing these doubts of life So much fun with you Where would you go? With whom would you talk?? Hello, hello Sometimes we do not listen to those that verbalise a thought proces thought ,feeling, reflection , Is this perfection? Jesus stands there looking at world’s rejection thought, feeling, reflection Would you join Him and His creation? Each of you is consuming Tasting and glowing Where? In the deepest darkness Do you even know what poisoned your hearts inside that’s pride, p r i d e ,right If those who search will find the way How should they stay sober? What’s your suggestion? If you search, you will find a way, Why stuck to stubbornness Where is clearness? Where obedience? The temptation is a murderer Killing beauty, peace and truth Self-esteem, self-control is all gone Would you look? Which way you wanna go? Maybe this story is about you....all.
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